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Named after the picture I put on the back wall. What were you thinking it was named after? Yeesh.
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Rashkah Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010
Steamy natural inter- Okay I'll stop.

I happened to find this link on your blog to the gallery after watching your Machinima (In for a Penny, yar) Which I'm loving so far. (Expect incoming fan art)

Now as far as this picture concerns, if you wouldn't like a critique, well, you are not obligated to read it. I would most likely suggest smoothing the texture on his hand, as well as his hair (It looks pixexalated and I am sure that is not the wanted result from your end.)

I don't know if you have ever considered venture into fixing their face textures as well. Retouching them to make them lose their 'cartoony' features the in-game models provide.

Those are my two cents, but now, since I got that down, I would like to add that the way you worked the lighting, positions and ambiance is really well done and I give you kuddos for that.

Hope my babbling wasn't too long. And keep on the good work. None can improve without practice, ya? ;3
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Selserene Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010
Thanks for the critique :)

I'm just a monkey with a photoshop brush, suggestions are always welcome! I did a lot more work on the female than the male in this picture, which is probably evident. You are very right I should have smoothed it more.

Cheers!
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Rashkah Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010
Weee!
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DesertDarky Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great image. =)
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